Your Opinions/Thoughts on My Poem?

Question by TSO: Your Opinions/Thoughts On My Poem?
I wrote this poem for school and it won a writing contest. What do you think of it? Feel free, if you wish, to critize it. We all think differently.

Wounded Soul
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If I hold the pieces
They crumble in my hands and leave cuts upon my fingers
But if I leave them standing alone
They wobble and come undone
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Held together by glue and tape, the pieces slowly drift apart
I push them back together
Only to find that it causes more
Destruction in the end
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Like glass the pieces crack
Showing signs that they have been abused
The picture not so clear anymore
Just a broken statue of what once was
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Pieces that formed something true
An art that can never be re-mastered
Too original to even be mimicked
The pieces of a wounded soul

Best answer:

Answer by Mike.
umm interesting

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