Q&A: What Do You Think of My Cast of Characters!?

Question by ~Claire~ FutureFilmmaker: What do you think of my cast of characters!?
Jack Lexo:
He’s going on 36. He’s a very quick tempered guy, frustrated easily. He was christian, but when his father left him at 13, he felt God didn’t love him and had let him down, so he left the church. He has a sister, Lynn. He’s married to Rachel. He’s got dirty-blonde hair that’s short but not buzzed. He usually has it slicked back with gel. He has ice blue eyes, a little stubble. He has a rugged look. He’s 6’1”, thin but not “stickly”, in fairly good shape. He works as a pretty well off lawyer in California. He LOVES baseball! Has a son (who had a twin, Will, but he passed away at 8 months), Charlie, and a daughter on the way (who comes in the middle of the story). His best friend is his middle eastern psychologist, Yousef. He drinks quite often, but isn’t an alcoholic. He drives a black Ford fusion type car.

Rachel Lexo-
She’s pretty quiet, has a captivating smile. She’s got olive skin and is a brunette. Her eyes are blue. She has a bit of a Russian accent lingering from when she was a girl, she lived their with her family until she was 14, but she’s always spoken english, too. She’s very observant, shy, and reserved. Doesn’t open up about much but when she does she BLOWS up! Is about 5’6”. She drives a mini-van.

Yousef Adahn-
Yousef is Jack’s shrink and also his best friend. He’s a little on the heavier side, has a facial hair, too. He has bushy eyebrows. He is a very good listener, he’s funny, but he can also be serious and very helpful. He has a daughter, Anuja, who’s good friends with Jack’s son Charlie. He likes a good scotch and hanging out at the bar. He smokes “lite” cigarette’s and is trying to stop because Anuja is asthmatic.

Charlie Lexo-
During most of the story he’s about 5 or 6. He’s a curious little boy, but has a temper like his father. He has dirty blonde hair and a square face shape. He has hazel eyes and is pretty tall for his age. He plays baseball and his dad is the coach. He has a big smile like his mom. Charlie is very friendly, too. He doesn’t remember anything about Will but frequently asks what he was like.

Nicole Bokir-
She’s Rachel’s close friend. She is the total opitimy of the stereotypical California girl- her blonde hair is out of a bottle, her lips and boobs are fake, she’s SUPER tan… Her husband is an actor/director and she stays home to raise her son Mikey and daughter Joelle.

The only one I’ve REALLY thought about is Jack. I’ve “known” Jack for about a year now and I’m just getting around to him. The rest I’ve sort of just “met”. Jack has been grilled with interviews and character profiles for so long… That’s why his is the longest and most “thought” out.

Are any of them mary sue’s? Should I change something/anything?

(Jusy FYI: This is a sci/fi type story, but not like alien/zombie type thing. If you want to know more, email me)

Best answer:

Answer by Hussein
Pretty awsome 😀 Big like

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