Can Someone Please Edit My Introductory Paragraph for the MSW Personal Statement?

Published May 28, 2010

As a single mother who has confronted issues like poverty, homelessness, domestic violence, and single parenting, I am committed to helping individuals achieve personal growth and I am determined to enhance the well-being of individuals from diverse backgrounds, such as the homeless, elderly, disabled, and single mothers. As a result of my own personal experiences,I am familiar with the constant despair and frustration to those struggling to survive. I am convinced that increasing our own sense of empowerment can make the difference between a future of despondency or one filled with hope. I am applying to the Master’s of Social Work because I am dedicated to pursing my life mission: helping others in embracing their inner potential to make a positive life transition. Preparation for my personal goal began began while I worked at Harbor View Adolescent Center as a Youth Counselor. My primary work responsibility involved my serving as a positive role role model for adolescents, ranging from ages twelve to eighteen. I also encouraged the adolescents to communicate more effectively and interact with others. The adolescents encountered issues such as physical and sexual abuse, abandonment, drug and alcohol abuse, depression, and severe behavior problems. At times, the position was extremely stressful;however, I discovered that I had the ability to connect with the adolescents and develop strong emotional ties. While working with them, I focused on several areas of treatment, including their social skills, vocational skills, and independent living skills, and not on their negative abilities. My main ambition was to help them build their self-esteem and improve their sense of security. My career goal specifically is to help the vulnerable and oppressed individuals who will benefit from improvement in their quality of live. I want to ensure that these groups of individuals have equal access for services, resources, and much needed guidance.
I have a Bachelor of Arts in Psychology and I look forward to earning an MSW degree because I feel strongly that this is the professional career that is the best match for my wanting to make a positive difference in the lives of others. The MSW degree will prepare me for service to a broad spectrum of people: with mental disabilities, physical disabilities, social problems, and family problems through rehabilitation counseling and helping individuals develop the necessary skills for dealing effectively and successfully with their personal problems.

Can Someone Please Edit My Introductory Paragraph for the MSW Personal Statement?

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