Can Anybody Make This Narative Longer About Two More Paragraph??? I Need Help,,,,Make Longer and Interesting?

Question by shania: can anybody make this narative longer about two more paragraph??? i need help,,,,make longer and interesting?
It is summer. As I lay on the beach, oblivious to the sun burning my skin, trying to find a way to forget the past, he comes toward me. I thought I would never him see again. He bends down and says, “I love you.” I always loved you. His words permeate me. I can feel the words, like precious gems, filling the cracks in my soul and mending my broken heart. As he leans toward me, it is obvious he wants to kiss me. I pull back, unsure of my feelings for him. Something I can’t explain propels me toward him. It is like a devotion to him, a love i have never felt before. I feel his warm lips against mine. Just as we part I know he is all I have ever wanted. His hot breath on my neck electrifies me. I close my eyes in anticipation and then….

I have often asked myself, “what would have happened if I refused that very kiss?” It is a thought so devastating, I cannot imagine. I love him and he loves me. What better can happen to me than that?

On a dark, rainy night months later, I awake with a start. Looking around my room I take in every detail; the light from the street casts an eerie shadow on my wall. I glance at the alarm clock. God its only 3:15 in the morning. I feel something moving at my feet. I tug on my blanket to reveal Nibbles,my faithful cat. He eyes me suspiciously, yawns and lays his head down. “you’ll always love me wont you?”

I get up and walk to my window. The rain is pelting the window. I breathe onto the window and trace his name in the drops of condensation. I fight back tears and swallow the lump in my throat as I whisper his name. “Michael,I miss you and will always love you” As the memories of the accident come flooding into my mind, haunting me, torturing my very soul …

Best answer:

Answer by earthlove
making me know what is the sorrow to love someboy and lose him , but this deep pain, the numerous rain drops will never know.

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