I Need Help : Can You Tell Me if This Text Is Correct ?

This document seems to be a child drawing which represents a child with violence al around of him. In fact,we can see kinds and arms of violence :
– a street violence with weapons (gun and knife) or drugs and alcohol
– a domestic violence with rough treatment (verbal or physical abuse)
– and the violence in the media with internet or TV which promotes and popularises this violence
Thanks to the plan and to the visible innocence of this drawing, we can imagine that the author is a child. I think this child is surrounded by violence as the child in the middle of the drawing.
We can feel the incomprehension and the illness of this child in front of it.

We can justify the use of brigtht color on account of the visible age of the author.
However this drawing might be made by an adult who wanted to draw the attention and to mark the person who looks at it.